At the End of Time

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Hi, I am on the thrid to second draft of my novel. It is about 72K word length. Synopsis: Residing within a lone mountain, 76 is but one member of their vast community of gifted beings. After their team’s mischievous shenanigans, it ensnares them toward a life of revelation and regret. Peeling at the seams of truth and lies what held that middle pours out eating them until the whole community is thrown into disorder. Interloper invasions, infections, and irreversible changes that no one can prevent descend upon them all. Flung into the fray, 76 must survive all the while trudging lines of shadows. As for crituiqe I am looking for clarity, flow, characters, plot, in short any critiques are welcomed!