Thomas the Brawler
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The first pass is complete, and I am working on a list of things to improve on the second pass. Things I know I need to work on: Better foreshadowing of certain late events More well-defined character voices for most characters A prologue (ties into foreshadowing certain late events) Fix for the tone of the final explicit-content scene