A Fallen Child's Guide To Being A Better Human
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A Fallen Child's Guide is an Undertale fanfiction about dead children getting resurrected after Asgore succeeds in his plan of getting seven souls to shatter the Barrier. Follow Angelo, the soul of bravery, as he tries to keep a mysterious child and a talking flower in check while trying to figure out where his killer, Asgore, and his sister disappeared off to. Note: This would be easier to understand if you played/heard of the source material. It may be difficult to follow along otherwise in certain parts, but it's certainly not impossible. The part I would be showing is about a 1/3 of the story that is edited enough so that my eyeballs don't burn. I have about 1/2 to 2/3 of the rest in another doc that is undergoing heavy editing. The last 1/3.... only I and god knows. Feedback I would like to focus on the cohesiveness on the plot and development of my characters. General feedback on my strengths and weaknesses would also be appreciated.