A Garden Among The Stars

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My wife and I have spent the last couple of decades world building with each other as a hobby. We love to create and craft people, societies and interesting ways to explore the worlds that we craft. We finally decided to write one of these worlds down and we are nearly ready to publish our first volume in an epic space opera. We are looking for honest critique. I am not sure how much we will share of it but we want to hear, what works and what doesn't. I have two other volumes in the works while this one still gets through my editor (who is brutally thorough) Here is my latest Blurb: Thrive was a great planet to live on, but for a scientist looking for mysteries to solve, it only had one to offer. Evun, with the help of his friends, plans to solve that riddle. The unexpected arrival of the empire however, will make this all but impossible. That is until Cita helps guide them through the dangers of the new Imperial presence to reveal the secret of the codex. Pursued by menacing robots, and an imperial force that wants to keep everyone right where they are, they quickly find themselves on an interstellar adventure to fantastic worlds, with strange and intimidating people who may prove to be allies or enemies, and facing incredible beasts as they continue to learn from where the Codex came, and what is ‘Motina’?