Heidi Riveira and her Astrological Collision with Cosmic Casualty Instigator, Lynn Coyote

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I started writing this, simply as practice. However, I really enjoyed how the short first bit gave me potential to unfold into many things. I'm unsure where to lead the story as it is, But the characters I came up with and the general idea pleased me. This in the document is just the first chapter, I'd like feedback so I know where to hold back, where to add on to and where to change things. Please be honest with your opions. I yearn to learn and improve.