The Mistress
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Word Count: 58000
This contemporary romance novel follows 22 year old Cat into present day Los Angeles immediately following her return to the US from Paris. Her BFF, Audrey, picks her up from the airport and takes her to a party. Cat ends up in a sticky situation when she hooks up with a guy who turns out to be Audrey's boss, a 33 year old married celebrity. I'm mostly looking for feedback on the story's flow and pacing, as well as input on the characters. However, I will take any and all criticism! Word count is based on Draft 1, but I am slowly adding everything from Draft 2 (most of my notes are handwritten).