How an Empire Crumbles

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My WIP is about the psychopathic mafia boss, Sadie Martinez, and Harley Warren, a girl with world class hacking skills. The more Harley digs, the closer she gets to secrets that could bring Sadie's whole empire down. The closer the two get, the more it's cemented that Harley will never get out alive. I've only written one chapter so far but would love some feedback. The more detailed the better. I'd also like to get some perspective on how the main character comes off.