Together

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Matteo is on vacation when he decides to climb up the roof of the hotel he's staying in to jump. But when he's there, he's not alone: Eleni, a girl the same age as him, is also there to do the same thing. After some arguing on the roof over who gets to go first, they form a pact: they will spend the most amazing days of their lives before finally jumping together at the end of the week. I just finished the first draft, and I now want to see some feedback before proceding with the editing. The word count is 26k and the story and writing style are very influenced by Ned Vizzini, especially his book 'It's kind of a funny story'.